Is this overwritten???

We slept beneath the open sky in our down cocoons. We had yet to earn credits in astronomy or geology or physics, but that night, as we counted falling stars until the bright celestial lights yielded to the blackness of our eyelids, we watched our universe expand.

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Lilli says:

I like it. I know that doesn’t answer the question, but i wouldn’t know.

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